Parents find a new punishment
Parents have found a new way of punishing you by stopping you from going on your computers, this is because a survey has proven that children spend too much time on the internet. Children spend most of their day playing on electrical devices than actually playing outside with their friends.
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Have parents only just have found out that if you ban going on an electronical device, that would be a suitable punishment?
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